tangled vines
crawl forgotten walls –
slow demolition
From the Archives: Haiku (non-strict form)
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tangled vines
crawl forgotten walls –
slow demolition
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The Hawk Squawks 
Excellent! I prefer the non-strict form or what Kerouac called the American Haiku: three lines, devoid of poetic trickery with a pop at the end.
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Love this – there is a cottage I wrote about near me which inspired a short non-fiction piece a few years ago. The images are still with me.
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Is the non-fiction piece available to read anywhere?
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Not at the moment – but I must remember to include it if I do a collection of stories sometime. Thanks for asking :>) I never realised how destructive ivy could be until I saw the inside of the ruin, which your pic and poem reminded me of.
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Glad you liked it. I do find the non-strict haiku to be rather liberating, and I might work on a few more in the coming weeks.
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