a full moon whispers
in the ear of a lost soul,
summons the werewolf
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a full moon whispers
in the ear of a lost soul,
summons the werewolf
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The Hawk Squawks 
“A full moon’s whisper
in the ear of a lost soul
summons the werewolf.”
Seems better English and more accurate. Do you agree?
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I like your revision. It has a better cadence than the original, and just feels more organic. Thank you for the feedback!
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Awesome!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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